Disclaimer: I don't think Arthur is boring *at all*. I think you've got a good grasp on the character and when I do see him around he's presented well. I especially remember that thread with Natasha way back when they were talking about guns and whatnot and I was extremely impressed with that.
My only crit is that sometimes in smut threads (I see this more with Eames tbh and could just be bias against the ones with Mavros because lol I love them) the way Arthur is presented seems to lose some of his unique voice. He feels a bit more 'generic' you could say instead of definitively Arthur but definitely not unrecognizable. That's really it? Please feel free to take that as you will and don't let what is thrown up on WG or what I say shake your confidence. You're lovely to play with and you aren't boring. I don't believe Arthur is worth that label.
...that starter for the thread with Edgeworth was very strong too.
I hope this isn't rude. I'm only saying anything because you were asking and I respect you a lot. If you've ever got any crit for me, I'll definitely hear you out.
:T and I guess now it's obvious that I stalk Arthur a lot fskaljfskalma /crawls away BUT THERE'S ANOTHER REASON WHY HE ISN'T BORING BECAUSE I WOULDN'T IF HE WAS
<3 of course it's not rude to crit me on my HMD when I asked for crit.
I will work on his voice in my smut threads, thank you. I was already mostly concerned that was where the problem was, and I will do my best to make sure I'm not slipping into the same generic pattern/getting repetitive. I think that's a weakness of mine in general, not just with Arthur, but I'll try to inject more of his thoughts and voice. With Eames and with everyone else. If you see me slipping again, please let me know?
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Date: 2013-02-09 03:26 pm (UTC)Disclaimer: I don't think Arthur is boring *at all*. I think you've got a good grasp on the character and when I do see him around he's presented well. I especially remember that thread with Natasha way back when they were talking about guns and whatnot and I was extremely impressed with that.
My only crit is that sometimes in smut threads (I see this more with Eames tbh and could just be bias against the ones with Mavros because lol I love them) the way Arthur is presented seems to lose some of his unique voice. He feels a bit more 'generic' you could say instead of definitively Arthur but definitely not unrecognizable. That's really it? Please feel free to take that as you will and don't let what is thrown up on WG or what I say shake your confidence. You're lovely to play with and you aren't boring. I don't believe Arthur is worth that label.
...that starter for the thread with Edgeworth was very strong too.
I hope this isn't rude. I'm only saying anything because you were asking and I respect you a lot. If you've ever got any crit for me, I'll definitely hear you out.
:T and I guess now it's obvious that I stalk Arthur a lot fskaljfskalma /crawls away BUT THERE'S ANOTHER REASON WHY HE ISN'T BORING BECAUSE I WOULDN'T IF HE WAS
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Date: 2013-02-09 09:56 pm (UTC)I will work on his voice in my smut threads, thank you. I was already mostly concerned that was where the problem was, and I will do my best to make sure I'm not slipping into the same generic pattern/getting repetitive. I think that's a weakness of mine in general, not just with Arthur, but I'll try to inject more of his thoughts and voice. With Eames and with everyone else. If you see me slipping again, please let me know?
Thank you honey!